Burning deep in my gut,
I've stopped eating again,
I haven't been sleeping,
And the world keeps turning,
I am stuck somewhere in between,
Hallucinating new things,
Seeing the world pivoting,
Trapped by wire stringers,
This place is fucked,
And so am I,
So am I,
So am I,
So am I,
Can you forgive me,
Redeem me,
Sin with me,
Oh fuck,
Don't l e a v e me,
I am just discovering who I am and you are mistakenly at my side.
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As long as you keep writing poetry like this, where the emotion just crashes through, you are not fucked, and you don't need forgiving -- whoever is at your side right now is fortunate, and you have quite a few of us on-line, virtually, at your side, too. The lines that popped out at me here are "I am stuck somewhere in between/Hallucinating new things, seeing the world pivoting,/ Trapped by wire stringers/" This is a very interesting view of your reality that you are sharing with us. You have much to share.
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wow this is really dark, but very powerful, it sent chills up my spine as i read it, what a terrible ordeal you must be going through right now
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