elle a des yeux enormes
un regard horrible et beau
comme un pont content de lui-meme
comme une prose saccadee dite par un chien errant et qui a trop bu ou trop patauge dans la fange...
elle se dandine
demarche chalouppee,elephantesque
et je rigole a chaque mot qu'elle eructe
elle et son sourire de deesse
plein de promesse diffuses,
confuses,
qui s'infusent dans mon etre
et partout des nains qui dansent
en se frottant la panse
en chantant Brel
avec des pas et des cabrioles sous les etoiles
des etoiles qui explosent en milles gerbes
et une seule etincelle
bonne nuit.
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hey I already commented on that :s, where the hell is my comment?!!!
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still can't find the door through which "dite par un chien errant et qui a trop bu ou trop patauge dans la fange" came from.
and is this surrealist or romantic? bcz i vote for romantic. -
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well if we're talking about the literary era it fits more the profile of a surrealiste piece, u see a romantic piece is mostly based in a natural background with emphasize and focus on the cadre and the situation and whatnots...
on the other hand it could be romantic if u consider it talks about a girl and includes some flattering adjectives... -
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but aren't surrealist poems supposed to be more twisted than that? based on sexuality and expressing it in terms that are seemingly innocent?
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transporting
it took me away to a higher more pure more serene more heavenly place and i thank u for that
~rana~
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well, let me say that its too frenchy for me, am so ashamed knowing that am french educated and could not understand some words (chi 10
), bas fi dictionnaire donc.....ca va.
i dont know if u caught every idea in this piece but i felt all kind of emotions, sometimes i felt you're moking , other times your appreciating, ,,,but at the end i can say that your words keep me always thinking and analysing, and what more can i look for in a poem
Amazing as always tergie
Johnny,,,,,
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