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Moon Shadows

The shadows on the moon, they say
are cast by us down here on Earth
Is there really any way
That our actions would travel so far?
Does it matter what we do,
to angels or demons on the moon?
DO WE REALLY MEAN THAT MUCH?
The answer, now, I'm telling you,
Is yes

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prompt number 3
yeah i know it's short.....

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  • dustytiger
    December 3, 2008

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    wow, great write, it might be a little short, but it's perfect as it is to me, i love poems about the moon, and this is just so beautiful, best of luck in the contest


  • SomeGirlYouKnew
    November 26, 2008

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    nicely done. i really didnt consider this take on the prompt.
    thanks for entering my contest, and good luck ^_^

    p.s. short, long, medium sized, i dont discriminate.