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Final Thoughts

My final tower surrounded
All my men confounded
I think and think “how could this happen?”
And I find myself astounded
Finally defeated
My destiny completed
Huddled in a corner
I find my life depleted

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Option 2
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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    interesting take on the prompt. I enjoyed reading your poem a lot.

    good luck
    kat