Smouldering flames
Sway reflected in your eyes
As we dance.
Fingertips……
Trace a velvet graze
Down your spine.
Heady red wine
Warms like lips
On a tender neck.
Candlelight glow
Flickers with desire
As our skin connects.
Silken hair
Against your chest
Breathless…...
Unspoken words
Promising more
If only you stay.
Author notes
Never written anything like this before, so thanks for inspiring me to do so with your contest!
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A contest entry
- Should I Stay...Or Should I Go?????? by SummerlandRayne.
739 points, ended December 10, 2008, 11 entries
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And did he? Did he? Stay.
You leave me breathless!
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Ooh er... missus... lol!
Great stuff!!!
Sensual, tender & passionate with the promise of what could be...
Wonderful narrative that enthralled & captivated throughout...
Well done!!!
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you have words with your imgae
you conect them both well done -
ooo..steamy.. this reads like a winner. I really like your metaphors and imagery
Good luck
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Senaual Delight...lovely words promising a sweet reward for staying...I loved this.
Az
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