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Mirror Eyes

Seeing so clearly,
so clearly, I am
losing sleep again.
Can't rest knowing
what I feel is
overwhelming.

Thank you for showing me
how shallow love really is...

Losing Sleep, losing faith,
seeing so clearly now.
You wouldn't understand this
even if I showed you how.

Seeing so clearly,
so clearly, I am
I am, through these
mirror eyes, now seeing,
these imperfections.

Thank you for showing me the truth....

Author notes

I feel that I am failing to capture my meaning here. It's been through at least three rewrites already, and I may continue to keep working on it. But what this is about is poor self-image.

don't care

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