The days go by
and I don't miss you
My heart beats the same
as it did when I wasn't with you.
You were just another notch on my belt
I did my best to respect you
I mess up once,
I do the wrong thing once,
and it goes to hell.
You don't matter to me,
This doesn't matter to me.
You were nothing to me
You treated me like dirt
just because I didn't follow your ways
You self-centered shit
'It's either your way
or the highway'
That's how I see it
There isn't a way to reverse this
I'm turning my back
I know what will help me,
and you aren't it.
Not before,
not now,
and never again.
Author notes
option 1 its not cheating but its a 'bang i don't need you anymore' type thing =D
prompt 2
this poem was made due to my anger towards someone i loved but somehow everything came crashing down.
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Bang! im so feeling the i dont need you anymore vibe!!! I so want to shove this write in my ex-fiance's face! that would just make my day to see his jaw drop as he read this. Haha. woooow. But anyways back to your poem, I LOOOOOVE it. Thanks for entering! Good luck and keep penning!
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my rules say no sweraing :l gd poem tho
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I like this short and to the point a powerful read.
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Thank you for entering this well-written, heartfelt piece. Yup, they'll want to change you to suit their needs.
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wow this is very good! its so angry. but written amazingly well. its nice when we can put such anger and pain into a great piece of art like this.
i enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing.
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