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My life passing me by.

My live passing me by

So many memories come to my mind,
A lot of them being not so kind,
My name is Troy and this is my story,
So much hurt in my heart… so many regrets,
So many whys? If only the clock could be turned back,
Maybe things would’ve been different,
Just think for an instant,
Reminiscing on past memories,
At this moment in time,
Maybe isn’t the right time,
Things so raw in my heart,
So much so… I could just hide away,
But I can’t; that much I do know,
Looking around me all I can see,
Is this room, in which I stay most of the time,
Time to let go of the past,
To finally grab that grasp,
And start living in the here and now.

Namaste Selfexpressive.

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  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Wow!!
    You know this going to be the hardest contest ever to judge ,
    You were so right on with your poem as well. You describe this pic almost perfectly. It just amazes me that you got so much from a pic.
    What an outstanding job.
    -Mandi


    • Selfexpressive
      November 27, 2008
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      Thank You Mandi...

      Thank you Mandi for your comments... I really enjoyed doing this one and am glad you liked it... many thanks again for your contest...

      Selfexpressive.

  • Bob Fox silver member
    November 26, 2008
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    Poet

    a poem of pain and yet filled with hope. Time indeed to move on. The world awaits your smile.


    • Selfexpressive
      November 27, 2008
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      Thanks Bob...

      Thank you Bob for your comments... I truly apprecitate them...

      Selfexpressive.