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Now I'm Alone

Alone
No one to trust
No one to hold
Alone
A feeling that just
Will not grow old

I can never see
Why you did all this to me
All that I hoped we would achieve

You were here
Chasing away all of my fears
Why did you throw it all away?

‘Cause I’m always here
Wiping away all my tears
Everything that I held dear
Now I’m alone
You were here, now you’re gone
So I’m writing down this song
In a hope I will belong
Where did I go wrong?

Author notes

This is a song I'm writing for the band I'm in. It's unfinished, but I have a pretty good idea on what I am going to write next.

Band members:
Me
Brisingr
Iguana54
paulchesterwolf

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  • Eusebius
    March 24

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    I have to admit, these are really pretty good lyrics, indeed... a lot better than many I actually hear sung.... nice work!!!


  • iguana54
    December 17, 2008
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    k, well done. wots v beat.


  • MrCrepsley
    November 27, 2008
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    Well DONE Burning Dragon. We'll make this song famous in are band