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The Ghostbuster

By day a mystic light
faint not bright
Hard to see
must look with care

Silent sound effects
oh how quiet
Mikes are ready
but not triggered

I'm wasting time
with no success
Day shifts out
I'll change to nights

By night a mystic light
incandescent
Now that is bright
easy to see

Sound is on
and noisy too
Clanging chains
and a moan or two

I'm winning now
working nights
Ghostbusting's not
a daylight job


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Just messing around

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  • worshipchick
    December 11, 2008

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    Haha, I enjoyed this. Still some great poetic imagery and some nice repetition even though you were just having fun. :-) Great write. Blessings!


  • myrataal silver member
    December 8, 2008

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    Be careful how you mess around, Poet!

    LOL you may be the one caught!

    How are you, Bill? Missing a South African Christmas? Good to see you online so often nowadays.



    A Peaceful and Joyous Festive Season for you and yours.
    Greetings from South Africa.
    Myra


  • thepoetssoul
    November 30, 2008

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    It would be kinda hard to find those buggers in the daylightThis was a wonderful write with exellent visuals.Brought a smile to my face.Thanks for sharing your poem.

    Tony