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snow






snowfall
on my tongue
a frozen drop





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Last Sunday I got a mouth full

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  • Yemassee gold member
    June 28
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    It is raining here today, so no snow and no, I am not going outside to get a drop of water on my tongue!

    How are you this weekend baxter?

    Oh, why am I here? Why not?


  • sense surreal
    December 1, 2008
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    icedrop

    I may never experience snow lol
    but when I read something about it
    It gives me an idea


  • hugh wyles silver member
    November 27, 2008

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    Dear Aziram

    That's the problem with haiku.
    Like snowflakes on your tongue....
    one quick taste and they're gone!

    We get snow here only in winter, never in summertime except on the tips of the alps. You can tell it's not going to snow when the sheilas are all wearing next-to-nothing and going brown all over. When they dress up in overcoats, scarves, woolly hats and thigh-boots it might snow then (but it's no use listening to the weather forecasts - they're hopeless.)
    Is snow in Belgium cold and white like it is here?
    I think it's summer now 'coz it's been hot and sunny and my bottle of scotch is nearly empty.

    BTW. That's a very fine haiku even if it's a bit short and I LOVE your bunnies!
    Applause, love and hugz, XXX el padre.





  • Peteskid gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Snowflakes to me are like haiku..asks the question can I see the beauty and wisdom of a small unique thing... wonderful haiku...PK


  • Yemassee gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Plusje and Snowje

    Every time you talk to me you get an earful!

    Something refreshing about flakes hitting the tongue...now I don't recommend making a practice of it, but sometimes it's unavoidable.

    Please, we must get one thing understood...I do not need to be reminded of snow!

    You are Marizaku. Gazeku?


  • tara wilson gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    that is not fair, we haven't got any yet, well one snowfall and that's it - it's gone=(

    i love your bunnies=)


  • dustytiger
    November 26, 2008

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    this is really pretty, i'm not generally a fan of haiku, but i really like this, it may be cause it's snowing and i now want to go catch a flake!

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