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my guts are spilling on to your floor

live in a in a world were no one is as they look.
in a world were no one tells the truth.
in a world were no one smiles anymore.
in a world were no one is really cool
in a world that's starting to be more like Ecstasy to me♥

this world is like a drug.
i always need more .
even if its hurting me i need mt shot of humanity
the words the pain me echo in my mind
there taunts tear me apart  and bring me to my knees
as i scream my voice is silents by the ever growing hate
as i hope for someone to hold me up


so sick of crying now i feel like i am dieing
from the inside out my guts are spilling on to your floor
the blood is allover its up the walls  my eyes have gone white
my heat in disbelieving carry's me out of this world

your eyes do not glow in the crowed it the funeral
no they did not even bother to show
i never wished to go...to leave you like this
but you never shade a tear for me

i think or your face when i fall to sleep
i think of your words like a razor
kiss my neak my wrist and give me my sleep

my smile no its never been real
my tears they dances it the back of my eye
the knife it still deep inside
pulls on my skin with its sharpened sides
the more pain the better i feel
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥



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its about self harm what it dose how it makes me feel and why

i was bored so i did this oh and hi abbzpopz

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Comments

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  • Dark Vampress
    February 4
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    Wow. This is very expressive. Great job.


  • deathchamber-of-sin
    December 9, 2008
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    Hey I like it gawjus it twists me insides around hehe I like tht hehe....gudwork.....xxxxx


  • Crying-Black-Tears
    November 26, 2008
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    Wow Robyn That Really Good


  • cherrylollypop
    November 26, 2008

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    i liked it
    it was very moving especially these lines

    there taunts tear me apart and bring me to my knees
    as i scream my voice is silents by the ever growing hate
    as i hope for someone to hold me up


  • robynsapoet
    November 26, 2008
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    hi hi abbie

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