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Masturbation




Hands roam fleshy desires
as the mouth whispers wanton needs,
and the heart quickens in anticipation.

An arched back indicates pleasure
while low moans communicate the closeness
for the pace is building with friction.

Pelvic muscles tighten around; claiming,
as many names escape with repressed memories
because no one is really there-
I please myself every day with no worries.

 

 

 

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  • LittleMoon silver member
    December 2, 2008

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    I though the title was going to lead to something very different but this is a wonderful piece of writing. Smooth, so sexy and so tastefully done.


  • Swtpoetryman
    November 28, 2008

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    WHY NOT DO WHAT COMES NATURAL, INDEED!

    because no one is really there-
    I please myself every day with no worries.

    And WHY NOT - as it is as natural as 1,2, 3 and A, B, C! A sweet and sensual piece with a perfect picture and background to go along with it - that made my hornier than a teen who has inadvertently taken his DAD"S monthly supply of VIAGRA all in one gulp - that had me stroking and pleasuring myself, too -

    because no one was here-
    I pleasured myself with no worries.

    Thanks for letting me watch - it was a very beautiful and stimulating sight to say the least!

    Love & Peace!
    Earl.


  • KayJay
    November 26, 2008

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    Sensual and erotic... almost voyueristic, your images were powerful and provocative... A truely brilliant write...
    Ken


  • forty-one
    November 26, 2008

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    Wow... that was a nice treat. Even with the title I didn't expect such beauty, and poise. Very, very nice job here!

    41


  • Galaxy2
    November 26, 2008

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    Next Time YouMasturbate....

    You masturbate so beautifully.Next time you mastubate, call me, honey! I want to watch and learn how to do it.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    this is a very erotic poem. one that fills the mind with wonderful imagery.. beautiful poem that you've written. I love your take on the prompt. Excellent job with this.

    good luck
    kat
    hug*

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