i passed through empty spaces
and heard the empty words
i drew the empty faces
on a canvas of a world
i walked along the river and drew the needle through the thread
and passed into the places where the angels dare not tread
there i stood at the foot of the mountain that streched into tearing sky
and pulled the thread through the orchard of the apple of my eye
there at the top, a void was looking down as the reign of lightning plummets down
and not a sound echo'd 'round this coming place that none had found
as i grasped the face of the mountain i found its stone was cold and wet
and so it remained from the time the sun rose 'till the time the sun would set
as i searched i found no stone untouched by the rain that came from obcurring cloud
that covered me with dream and death that surrounded like a gown
and through the rift it raged into the place from which i'd came
rending quietly 'cross the countryside erasing ev'ry name
and as i watched it mow and reap
(unable to pray my soul to keep)
there were no words to be my last
as my cheek fell softly upon the grass...
A contest entry
- Gates Of Hell by Deceits Tears.
1200 points, ended December 8, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You have penned a great piece here, thankyou for your entry, and all the best
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thank you for the silver
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Loved it. Great write. Good luck in the contest




