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Leaving Tonight

I feel as if I'm leaving the world tonight,
No one is here to fight for me anymore,
Thought I could count on your love,
But even you are just a faint memory away,
Hope to God that your okay,
But I guess you don't need me anymore,

Am I really that bad?
That no one will care for me?
I just don't understand,
I thought for a second that I was worth It,
Washed that thought right into the shore,
Guess it's true,

I Guess I'm leaving the world tonight,
Don't really have anything to say to you,
Have alot of thoughts circling my mind,
But I won't speak tonight,
My thoughts are worth nothing more than I,
Which is nothing more than pennies laid on your table,
Because tonight I'm leaving,

I'm packing my Bags and going,
Goodbye to You Beautiful,
You were the closest one to me who stayed true,
Wherever I end up, I'll pray for you too,
Remember that I love you,
You always did see me as Week, Guess you were right too...

Author notes

I don't think this is one of the best poems that I've written, but i was feeling really down and this is what came out.
Written February 5th, 2004

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  • rainbowpirates
    February 4, 2004
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    Never let any one take your power away.