frozen water's translucent glass
lies dormant until the sun steals
the chill and leaves a puddle to
evaporate solidity
Author notes
prompt: ice
19 words
A contest entry
- his tears fall like snakes down his cheeks. by stylization.
625 points, ended November 26, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
Very creative and so well expressed. Congratulations on the silver
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I can see why trophies were added, very nice work Carole.
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it's just a scene, just a description of what one might learn in science class, but it's amazing.
you said so much in so little, and the imagery was fantastic.
thank you so much for entering and welcome to the prelim finals!
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