Serenity
Cherry Blossom
blazing against the snow
Serenity
Serenity
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In a list
A contest entry
- in just 10 words........ by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 27, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This reminds me of a late April up here in Vancouver many, years ago. I stepped out onto my back porch and was startled to see snow all over the ground, the contrast with the rich colour of the cherry blossoms was something I will never forget . . . beautiful piece, Sukura, sukura indeed!!!!!
Marc

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a good piece of poetry, ah the colour is bold against such a stark background, nature's presentation - special offer - free.


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if you call in the next ten monutesl
we will also offer immortality
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Yup!
A perfect ku to describe what's seen! I wonder if this is a real pix.
Beautiful match nonetheless.
Thanks for this. Always enjoy your writes.


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no the pic is acomputer thingy
thanks for your kind words
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A serene scene you paint with your poetic palette.


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My humble thanks
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Love this...
First off, love the pic, its spectacular...
And the piece, fantastic...
For so few words to set a scene in the mind of the reader is great poetry... And I always love great poetry...
Well done!!!

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my humble thanks
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Amazing! So well-done, a perfection in miniature. A great picture, as well.


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my humble thanks
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Sweet and peaceful.... I like the picture too.

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Stunning picture, and I like the poem as well. Great choice of words.
One minor spelling error: "Cherry"


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my humble thanks
thank you again for catching my error, that's what I get for typing in the dark
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Such a peaceful write...Bravo!

Mariana


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my humble thanks
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Subtlety, a gift many are lax on. A wonderful thought, this one.


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beautifully creative... x
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Namate thak you
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Wonderful
Very well expressed for a short poem. Great choice of words. Best of luck in the contest.

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Namaste my friend thank you
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beautiful
hey! I don't usually like short and sweet poetry... haikus and such... btu this one summed up the picture very well. I really like it... It was a beuatiful write! -
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Namaste
thakyou my friend
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beautiful words for a glorious vision.


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oh my
thank you oh for some serenty
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beautiful
stunning pic. The words are a perfect fit for it!


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Naamaste
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