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Serenrity

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Cherry Blossom
blazing against the snow
Serenity


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  • This reminds me of a late April up here in Vancouver many, years ago. I stepped out onto my back porch and was startled to see snow all over the ground, the contrast with the rich colour of the cherry blossoms was something I will never forget . . . beautiful piece, Sukura, sukura indeed!!!!!

    Marc


  • individuality gold member
    April 12

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    a good piece of poetry, ah the colour is bold against such a stark background, nature's presentation - special offer - free.


    • Draig aine gold member
      April 12
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      if you call in the next ten monutesl

      we will also offer immortality

  • Yup!

    A perfect ku to describe what's seen! I wonder if this is a real pix. Beautiful match nonetheless.
    Thanks for this. Always enjoy your writes.


  • TankA
    January 3
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    A serene scene you paint with your poetic palette.


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Love this...

    First off, love the pic, its spectacular...
    And the piece, fantastic...
    For so few words to set a scene in the mind of the reader is great poetry... And I always love great poetry...
    Well done!!!


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Amazing! So well-done, a perfection in miniature. A great picture, as well.


  • Shantti silver member
    December 4, 2008
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    Sweet and peaceful.... I like the picture too.

  • Topnotchsy
    December 3, 2008

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    Stunning picture, and I like the poem as well. Great choice of words.

    One minor spelling error: "Cherry"

    • Draig aine gold member
      December 3, 2008
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      my humble thanks

      thank you again for catching my error, that's what I get for typing in the dark


  • Mariana gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Such a peaceful write...Bravo!

    Mariana


  • oceanbluize
    November 27, 2008
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    Subtlety, a gift many are lax on. A wonderful thought, this one.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 26, 2008
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    beautifully creative... x


  • penman gold member
    November 26, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well expressed for a short poem. Great choice of words. Best of luck in the contest.

  • stargazer7
    November 26, 2008

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    beautiful

    hey! I don't usually like short and sweet poetry... haikus and such... btu this one summed up the picture very well. I really like it... It was a beuatiful write!


  • sunoir
    November 26, 2008
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    beautiful words for a glorious vision.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 26, 2008
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    beautiful

    stunning pic. The words are a perfect fit for it!

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