The rush is over
settling now in comfort
the world recedes
Saturday afternoon
the warmth of a wood fire burning
rekindles my heart
settling now in comfort
the world recedes
Saturday afternoon
the warmth of a wood fire burning
rekindles my heart
In a list
A contest entry
- in only 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 27, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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a wonderful piece of poetry that lifts the light into comfortable warmth, the world a distant memory now.
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wow
this is an oldie, had not read it in a long time thanks
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Yes! Very lovely. Rekindles my heart is a memorable line.
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hmm
missed this comment, as you so rekindle my heart
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Another Impressive piece...
You truly are a mistress of your craft...
Such wonderful imagery...
Keep up the good work!!!
Well done!!!
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Beautiful, love the feel of this. Have you ever heard of Thomas Kinkade? This poem gave off a similar feel as when I look at some of his paintings, which is something special.
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thanks
yes I am familiar with his work, my profound thanks
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Wonderful
Great choice of words. But I guess to long for the contest. -
Oops! 10 words... x
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oops
caught up in the haiku sorry
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aaahhh..
and it feels so so relaxing, what nice peaceful piece, i like this!
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well written. Best of luck in the contest.
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Namaste
my humble thanks
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