Impotent my hours
hope for you
promises of yesterday
like a poem printed,
nothing else.
A silence pronounced
your absence, disdain,
transitional moments,
leaving flooded,
my privacy.
Process Volvo
to re-energise
batteries of your love.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: Option 2
http://iardacil.deviantart.com/art/Tread-softly-details-104392613
35 words
A contest entry
- 10/35/40 Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hopefully waiting for your precious comments
Comments
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this is absolutely an excellent take on the prompt. the imagery within this poem is vivid and I love it. I particularly love the second stanza. Fantastic job on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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" transitional moments,
leaving flooded
my privacy"
Great poem, I loved it.
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