Old-Street
barked
like bohemian dogs.
Thank God
you weren’t drunk.
A contest entry
- in only 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 27, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
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would've loved to see
thank god
we were drunk
instead
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the vision created from such a simple segment was intense.
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i actually liked this one...lol ... thanks
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Excellent imagery. The title was well suited too!
You deserved the GOLD!
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bohemian dogs..gotta love that!
congrats on the gold !
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love the image of 'bohemian dogs'...not that you haven't heard that before
Really like this
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"Old-Street
barked
like bohemian dogs."
LOVE this=)
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thanks you!!!!
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It's also a crime in all provinces & territories of Canada
"like bohemian dogs."
Where do you get this amazingly awesome stuff?!!! Lovelovelovelovelovelove this, especially for Old-Street.
LMAO at the last two lines!
Mazel tov............!
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Jessica
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lol you are so cute.... thanks.
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Classic! love it... x
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this stands out from the crowd.
YOU stand out from the crowd (:
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dang, esha! you are just so good it's a crime in like 15 states
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really good, bohemian dogs, classy image.
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this is really good esha
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thanks mary
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but I was!
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hence YOU are the "I" here
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