Each teardrop
collected upon leaves
a constant reminder
of her broken heart
every emotion lays
embedded deep within
as she tries to move on
knowing deep inside
she will never be
the same again
Author notes
35 Words
Picture Prompt #1: http://autumn-ethereal.deviantart.com/art/Autumn-Ethereal-81379364
A contest entry
- 10/35/40 Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and applause on my work. However, please be sure not to use my name in your comments. I appreciate it!
Comments
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this poem is so beautifully sad. every experience that we have changes us in some way, and know we aren't the same after it.. whether its a positive one or not. this poem struck me in many ways, the sadness throughout it drips from each word.. this is a very strong piece, and I love your take on the prompt.
excellent job
good luck
kat
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Such a sad poem of pain and memories retained, well done and great take from the picture.
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beautiful, I love it
hugs Moony
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just as the water left an impact on that leaf, you poem left on on me, this was a great poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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A beautiful creative take on the prompt.
I really like this.
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aww...this is sad
beautiful write Jeremy !
Good luck
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very smooth nice poetry here i was impressed here with this its the finest chinet of words good luck in the contest
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wow this is really quite amazing, with only those few words you blew my mind away honestly, it's such a simple but pretty and powerful piece, best of luck in the contest
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My clappys didn't go through!!
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WOW! J this is so deep and a wonderful write here!! Good luck in the contest
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Beautiful
well written. few words used but used well and expressively. Well done.
*go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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