autumn promises splendid treasures
colors blossom and slowly fall
winds of change gracefully endure
to enrich earth with evolving display
no one recalls your noble gifts
lie at rest for the growth of spring tears
Author notes
prompt:
Option #1 from deviantart.com (click to view)
http://autumn-ethereal.deviantart.com/art/Autumn-Ethereal-81379364
35 words
A contest entry
- 10/35/40 Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
Very creative and so well expressed. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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This is a lovely write I love the first stanza congrats on your HM best wishes in her contest be well
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beautiful write!! I really like this piece
Good luck in the contest
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You have indeed painted such beauty in the imagery. Much has to be said in the shorter poetic form.
Thank you for the pleasure of walking through your 'Spring Tears" Good luck in the contest. Simply beautiful.
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Lovely
"colors blossom and slowly fall
winds of change gracefully endure"
Such beautiful wording you have penned here.
Well done.
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this poem is simply beautiful.. I adore this one so very much. it has a calming feel to it at least for me it does. and lately this feeling is something that I've missed. this is an wonderful poem, I love the imagery ..
good luck
kat
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