Can the world about you,
feel the person within .
Or do you hide behind the dressings ,
with a certain grin.
If so then who are you,
to be trusted in time .
Is it a lie.
Author notes
Option 2 Always be yourself never lie for in time if you lie you begin to be that person leaving the part of you behind that was and could have been the most loved of all
A contest entry
- 10/35/40 Quickie! by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like this piece..not much of a fan of rhyme but this flowed really well and I like the questions you ask at the end. very powerful write
Good luck
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A thought provoking write.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Well done.
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wow this is an amazing poem. there is so much raw truth throughout this piece. I really love this one a lot. I'm guessing this is for the second option. if it is can you come back and place the option number and link in your Authors notes please
good luck
kat
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