A treasure is not what you want or need,
A treasure is what you've got dont you see?
The treasure is your life that your spending with me,
So jump up with glee, your treasure is here,
All you need to do is look in the mirror.
Author notes
Hmmmm i dont like this one lol
A contest entry
- Shall I Try Again? by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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So true so true
To find oneself as you did as a child and embrace yourself with love is the way out of self sorrows for you are the one who can make the change to be free and to love oneself first is the key
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You have penned some excellent truths in this
I did get a little confused as there is some rhyme and then an ending in a more freestyle. But considering your age you did a fine write here
I have to admit that the background colour was VERY loud!
But I thank you for your entry
gaylene
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