Separated from familiarity,
blown & tossed by Zephyr
the whispers of solitude pass me by.
Moisture coagulates upon my warmth,
comforting a lonely & sometimes harsh journey,
propelled onto plush green carpeting,
sighing, safe passage.
Author notes
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35 words
A contest entry
- 10/35/40 Quickie! by K a t.
700 points, ended November 30, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. Another great poem by you. Lovely, lovely choice of words with stunning imagery. Congratulations on the HM.
Much love
Ylova
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Oh this is beautiful! I see you haven't written much in a very long time. This is a brilliant write. Keep penning.
Love
Alyzeh
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Oh wow this is really lovely.
A pleasure to read..beautiful.
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Lovely write! the last stanza is breathtaking...
Good luck
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I really love this one.. the beautiful journey in life. all things go through one I do believe. the imagery is absolutely beautiful & its wonderfully vivid. so softly written, the gentleness is felt throughout your words.
Fantastic job with this ..
good luck
kat
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The journey of a leave....very calmly done with a soft touch. You can it smell almost, well done!! Good luck in the contest
(Blown doesn't have a capital)
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