Soft lips kiss petals
Making my pink rose blossom
With total pleasure
A contest entry
- Make Me Clinch My Face With A Deeply Sensual Haiku by theredcatjazzoflove.
800 points, ended November 30, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Erotic
Three lines, but it says a lot. I can imagine your pink rose blossoming. Anyway, you got a real gift and I just want you to know that you are a good poet. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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this was sexy very visual may i add you really did a very enthralling job here good luck to you in the contest
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wow this is beautiful, i am coming across some really amazing hiaku today, although it's not usually my thing, it's good to see that people, such as yourself, can make it beautiful, and strong and something worth the time to read!
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Savoring
loves sweet nectar in
a field of endless dreams.
Cherished lovers forever as one
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whew!!
wow, very hot my friend, lots of luck to you in the contest!
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This is a really good haiku from you hon!
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very good
extremely romantic
very clever write
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amazingly titled! soft and sensual delight...
lips are just sealed with the beauty of this...
Anna Lee
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