Enclosure spiny roses
suffocates perfume scent
bleeding, colourless, dry.
Evaporating youth
silk appearance, acid rain
damaging roots.
wilting; satin sheets flutter
dusty earth, tuneful song
never to be forgotten.
A contest entry
- the nameless wonder by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended November 29, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was ok of a write. THe imagery was simply clear and the description was clear.
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I really like this...this is so emotional..full of pain
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great imagery...i really like the ending
Good luck
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