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Your angel

I welcome you both to the circle of life
the gatekeeper and gazelle, two souls entwined
soon to be joined by a creation of love
and sent as a gift from the heavens above

your hopes and fears about to come true
another human life, every breath on you
but inside you'll find everything you need
to enjoy your journey with another heartbeat

and as time passes by and everything grows
from a little baby flower to a breath taking rose
for she will be both halves of you
and bring tears of joy like beads of dew

so all thats left is to welcome this life
remember each other and walk side by side
and listen to the beauty in your baby Elysabeths cry
for then you will know your angel has arrived

Author notes

Thanks to Mike and Anya for their help. This poem is dedicated to

Travis and Ayla. Congradulations and I hope all your dreams come true

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  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    December 9, 2008
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    Nick, this is really gooddddd!
    I cant believe you think your not a good writer!

  • Much-Dipstick
    December 3, 2008
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    Wow, Nick, your poetry is amazing that's so beautiful


  • crash13
    December 2, 2008
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    wow that waz gud keep up the gud work!!

  • The Ice Breaker
    December 1, 2008
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    awwwww

    that was so beautiful, nice job


  • Mrs. Mautino
    November 30, 2008

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    That's such a sweet poem about a baby's birth It's very personal and no other gift can replace it. It flowed beutifully and it was very simple, yet sweet. Great job, Nick


  • Invader-Zim
    November 29, 2008
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    i really like this poem alot it's beautiful


  • sophia moonfairy
    November 28, 2008
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    aww this is beautiful nick keep up the great work


  • BloodWhiteOleander
    November 28, 2008
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    wow

    thats really good. its got a great flow and yu can feel the meaning behind it.
    Bp


  • Edited
    November 28, 2008
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    i say well done.
    a way cool dedication which of im sure their proud.


  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 28, 2008

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    wow. this poem is really beautiful. its such a lovely write. its special, and very meaningful. keep penning


  • LoveAndCocaine
    November 26, 2008
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    Awww...Nick..I love it.
    it's so sweet. Thank you!!!!


    • lonelyboy
      November 28, 2008
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      No thank u for giving me the chance to write it. U can print it out hang it on ur wall(Hint hint) lol. I hope everything goes well

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