I welcome you both to the circle of life
the gatekeeper and gazelle, two souls entwined
soon to be joined by a creation of love
and sent as a gift from the heavens above
your hopes and fears about to come true
another human life, every breath on you
but inside you'll find everything you need
to enjoy your journey with another heartbeat
and as time passes by and everything grows
from a little baby flower to a breath taking rose
for she will be both halves of you
and bring tears of joy like beads of dew
so all thats left is to welcome this life
remember each other and walk side by side
and listen to the beauty in your baby Elysabeths cry
for then you will know your angel has arrived
Author notes
Thanks to Mike and Anya for their help. This poem is dedicated to
Travis and Ayla. Congradulations and I hope all your dreams come true
What did you think
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Nick, this is really gooddddd!
I cant believe you think your not a good writer!
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Wow, Nick, your poetry is amazing
that's so beautiful


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wow that waz gud keep up the gud work!!


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awwwww
that was so beautiful, nice job

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That's such a sweet poem about a baby's birth
It's very personal and no other gift can replace it. It flowed beutifully and it was very simple, yet sweet.
Great job, Nick


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i really like this poem alot it's beautiful


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aww this is beautiful nick keep up the great work


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wow
thats really good. its got a great flow and yu can feel the meaning behind it.
Bp

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i say well done.
a way cool dedication which of im sure their proud. -
wow. this poem is really beautiful. its such a lovely write. its special, and very meaningful.
keep penning


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No thank u for giving me the chance to write it. U can print it out hang it on ur wall(Hint hint) lol. I hope everything goes well
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