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Its in my head, you are...

My mind
plays violin tunes
on nerved strings intertwined
reflecting bygone blue moons
and advancing treasure tombs.
My head
full of mangled disarray
is lately so misled
cracked open, put on display
in my head, I welcome you to play.
My thoughts
of late have been somewhat bleak
infesting my paragon with warts

pull my weeds from the creek

plant sweet roses, in a sneak.

My mind

has a spirit of it's own

it will never forget the time's with you, it will always remind

me how from this residing orb you were blown

in your vanishing, I learnt to fly all alone.

In my head,

my thoughts can be read

In my mind,

I am confined.

Flowers of grace

will sprout my thoughts in time

them, I will water, and drown an embrace

and from this phase I will climb

You've been in my head,

you caused the flowers to shred

but those flowers were also grown

due to your smile, your laugh, your everlasting atone.

In my mind, all this, you will find...

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  • Candyknife gold member
    November 29, 2008
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    very nice

    i love the rhyming i was very impressed with the rhyme scheme
    keep up the good work