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" Build You An Empire "



Build you an empire
From here to the far lands
From here inside my heart to yours

Build you an empire
The way it glows once you step in
The way it cleanses fear like a disease

Build you an empire
Create a flood of my kindness
Create a disaster of my passion

Build you an empire
To spread my loyalty like a plague
To spread my love like violence

I'd show you the life that's in it
You'd love it for all that's inside it
My heart is your empire

Carry you inside, lift you up
Hear your words spread hope like fire
Scorching my heart with desire
Hear your voice echoe back louder
Bleeding my heart of happiness



Author notes

i had fun!. and i seriously tried, took me hours and i still dont like it, it doesn't feel right or somethings missing i dont know, and have nothing more to add, used up all my inspiration, maybe some sleep will help.. i really hope you like it

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  • Candyknife gold member
    November 27, 2008
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    very nice

    i love how the background gave kind of a distance-like feel to it
    thanks for entering