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Song Of Many Roses

Bind him in a garland hearts,flowers
snuggle him tight rest his years.
Wipe away pain when falls down
gently kiss placed on his crown.

Laughter echo’s,  smile, not one sin.
Sing him song hold onto forever,
child of your own is red rose in your
palm, precious son.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Yes Just gorgeous! I can feel such love in your poem, which makes me feel it's about a lillte one very close to you! Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene


    • Entwining Beauty
      November 26, 2008
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      Thank you so much

      My 4 year old son his name is Jason-lee he is my angel. When I saw your contest
      somethink clicked I just had to write my poem thank you so much.