Hearts pounding...
Passions building...
Esctasy arising
Only by a single kiss!
dragonheart1
Author notes
prompt: Saturdday afternoon
I am one word over the l0 line limit..I know but it cant be shortened.
A contest entry
- in only 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 27, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like it.short but full of meaning and truth
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A day of bliss found in a single kiss...that can be true! Pam
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enchanting!.. x
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i like the line "hearts pounding" but the line "esctasy achieved" is weird, but it works so i guess it's ok
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