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Creation





Creating vermilion aura in misty mornings
a dream around adhere clinging vines,
not wanting to arouse desire,
but serenity;
when to feel floral sockets around arms
creeper hands caressing my nakedness,
beginning of a love with no barriers.

You know, I told you,
I love you more than yesterday
to illuminate my hopes,
with surrounding kisses tender
after the sublime, where we reached
lighting our flora reality,
a total dream
next to you to nourish my life's eternal heat,
with instincts to fuel
the contacts by rubbing skin buds
of an intimacy to impact upon an awakening
in angelic sweet voice,
crisp created only for me.







Author notes

Picture prompt ~ Pic by Atra-Virago
credit pic - http://atra-virago.deviantart.com/art/Torture-Garden-71033164




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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Great take on the prompt...You used a lot of good imagery and metaphors throughout this piece. sensual write

    Good luck


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 26, 2008
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    bravo