time can not reverse my lapse of judgement
not console me
there is no fault but that of misinterpreted conclusions
perception perceived of ones actions and words are so easily
at times misjudge
all tho that dose not make it any less embarrassment or hurtful
love can not be willed on demand or captured for selfish reasons
it is not a possession
pride prohibits us from excepting the charity of pity sentiment
either our hearts connected in an instances without hidden agendas
or its existences is not
sympathy is no replacement for the warmth of true loves embraces
A contest entry
- and This is Unrequited by YourTruestIntention.
625 points, ended December 18, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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i really like a lot of what you're saying here, and how you expressed it, but i wish you would have read over it- i was distracted by mechanical errors enough that it detracted from my enjoyment of the poem. you def show potential though!
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