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story of love

flying blades stabbing humble trusted shadow
squares of diamonds elevating inside you
shine the light upon your shoulders
wich becomes your eyes
smiling eyes! beautiful sweet charm!
awakening  particles of tickling motion in my head
blowing butterflies outside of my mouth
they grow big so big i can ride them
with you, and leave.

Fly around the blue water ball of conquered dreams.
And make pillows with the clouds coloring them with your kisses.
so the moments im not awake, you can get inside my mind.
kiss my nightmares .
so i'll wake up in my dreams
and kiss you to fully feel this reality
to embrace our souls with the gift
of pure love destroying us in particles of light.

when the springs sun shines
we can grow back and love ourselves
with no end for the rest of the time.

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