silent earth
virgin again,
sucks all time,
giving bounty.
eggs do not dry up
in its bosom,
ovulate immortal
things come out
vanish,
but it's fresh.
keeping inexhaustible pigment
paints in different hues;
born life,
returns to it,
living as mortal.
damsel feeling earth
to unleash secrets,
finds friction through fingers
without breakthrough.
Author notes
(artist credit: "don't offer me roses" by temporary-peace at DA
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I think this is a very interesting and creative piece. I must have read it 30 times
I really like the first and last stanzas.
Great write and Good luck


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