Wrapped in thorns of a swirl
stands a lovely little girl
as the petals fall to the ground
just to land all around
there is the thought of a twirl
There’s magic in a notion
lost in loves magic potion
taken away by the breeze
in love you show with such ease
that leaves me lost in emotion
A contest entry
- Semi-Quicki- Picture Prompt by Catie Sheeran.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i liked this! Wonderful imagery in your words.
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Thank you, my best wishes.
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"There’s magic in a notion
lost in loves magic potion" great write! and good luck
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pretty
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Thank you, my best wishes.
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