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all your senses make sense

running away on a road that is falling down
circles of fire and a stream of rocks ahead
I stop and kneel down
I close my eyes
everything turns white
I look up in the sky
a thought comes out of my mouth
like a cloud
starts to spread in millions of flowers
everywhere
your face appears over the mist
repeating this words "all your senses make sense"
opened my eyes!
and Im strong enough to explode
and become part of everything
like you did.

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For the people I love
gives me power.

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