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[ A forgotten existence... ]

A forgotten existence...
Sorrowful eyes that portray nothing

but emptiness inside.
No more dreams or hope alike.
Troy has given up on life...
People he believe he loved, are so far away.
No-one really knows how to help.
They cannot reach his lonely heart,
All he can think but not say
Is "please help" or "keep away".
A loner he is,
A guide he needs.
Someone to listen,
Someone to help.
Troy is facing is own decay.
Let him not fall, he needs a place to stay.
His body has become but a empty shell
He has protected himself far too long'
Now he cannot, not alone,

sustain the blame nor the pain
Tears want to fall, yet for what if they will not help.
How to change thy given fate?
Only hope and time will tell...
Speak no words for I know of your pain
Cry no more and let the pain slowly melt away.

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  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Wow you got all of this just from his pic??
    You so gave me cold chills because you are so right on..
    The line "People he believe he loved, are so far away"
    Really spoke to me .. I love this piece ALOT!!!
    What an amazing write awesome job!
    -Mandi


    • DarkTears
      November 27, 2008
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      Im happy to hear that

      Thank you and glad you like it...