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.salt in the water.




as we split at the seams;

time falls through cracks,
dispels, dissolves---


salt in the water


as if these words were enough
to take out these
ink stains,
cigarette burns
from my
razor sliced heart


the moment you paused;;;
was the second i knew.


oh darling,




this is one for the books.



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  • Miss Faith
    November 26, 2008

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    oohhhh!
    pulling at my heart...so sad, but lovely, thank you for entering