cross the skies of heaven and earth
How can one tell what a teardrop is worth
For the lady who waits with love in her eyes
and arms that hold her in true soft fires
We burn down cornfields of immeasurable size
For she is the sun and I am the moon
Our hearts beat a bridge of an ever changing swoon
We stand together as furious winds scream and call
But nothing nor noone can cause us to fall
Eternal Universal infinite rose of decree
Forever and ever love it will be...
A contest entry
- Suzyque needs to know...Is Love Alive....Show me...Past Present, Future by SuZyCuE.
900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 12 entries
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For she is the sun and I am the moon
Our hearts beat a bridge of an ever changing swoon
the beginning of this is kind of heard before but this line is something i like i don't know why, keep it flowing -
Excellent
A very charming write, indeed. Imagery; lrhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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