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Thorns

Upon a bed of
thorns, Aphrodite
blooms. Rending
my soul, with her
beauty, unmatched.
My heart is captured,
in the venus fly
trap of her eyes.

I will never
look away.

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    oh, this is beautiful "rending my soul, with her beauty, unmatched. My heart is captured in the venus fly trap of her eyes- I will never look away"
    great write

    Good luck


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 26, 2008
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    nice