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Contest: Funny Pic by penman

 

Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrroses are red,
  ununionized elves are'nt weak.

That commie Santa never foresaw
  that Prancer had a freak.

 

 

 

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    Brilliant!!!

    Wishing you the best of luck in the contest!! Peace, Cyn