new life
all around her
growing
embarking
in a new direction
she stepped out
and onto
a pedestal to
her future
blossoming in her heart
love for herself
it was like
her essence finally bloomed
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2428/453.jpg?1227693088
by atra-virago from deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Semi-Quicki- Picture Prompt by Catie Sheeran.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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and i am sure someone else will take notice...
one who will kneel at your feet and lay down their love for you
mal
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ya right, i wish but it does not happen like that, there is always some price to pay for something you want...it just depends what u are willing to pay for it, sometimes money, sometime sacrifes, sometimes yourself!
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hymn of hope !
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I really like that you were creative and took the prompt somewhere else. and i like your word choices Great write and good luck
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new life
all around her
growing
embarking
in a new direction
she stepped out
and onto
a pedestal to
her future
blossoming in her heart
love for herself
it was like
her essence finally bloomed
wow such a wonderful write good luck
love the rev papa
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yeah..
the opening up oneself to new possiblities, could be all good. nice write my friend.
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Beautifully illustrated by the pic. The theme here is wonderful, self discovery can, as in this piece shows us bring...possibility in to our life! Lovely thoughts.
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Finding oneself is a good thing..her essence finally bloomed. God lluck in the contest
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