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Buds rising in the mind and capturing fascination
from the intuitive stems rooted deep in the soil,
which the heart waters.

They flower as a constant transforming display,
inspiring blooms before eyes,
the petals forming a visionary bouquet
spreading their diverse images,
perfuming the brain with rare and exquisite thoughts.

One becomes a paramour of lucidity,
sprouting an intimate creative liaison,
the obsession burns for honeymoon
with blossoming inventive mistress,
who wraps her sultry vine of profoundness
around every other notion rose
that was held as unique.

Becoming a siren
unto a vernal essence,
where spring is a love affair
through new arrays of inner discovery,
finding that perfect mating orchid of thinking
who bears offspring
as the arrangements of awakening.

Author notes

3. Please credit pic - http://atra-virago.deviantart.com/art/Torture-Garden-71033164
Pic by Atra-Virago

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  • carole21
    November 29, 2008

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    very well done . . great expression . . liked "Buds rising in the mind" and "from the intuitive stems rooted deep in the soil" . . great beginning . . congrats on the gold


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    This is a very soft and beautiful piece. I really like this one. so much imagery and poetic devices...this made me sigh. great write

    Good luck


  • HpWICKEDangel
    November 26, 2008
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    the softness of this piece. the transformation of life. you have pieced it so perfectly.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    wow bro And you got that from the picture! Juast amazing, but it doesn't surprise me You are an exceptional writer
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    This is beautiful and you did so well with the prompt that was given here! Your descriptions are wonderful and the write it self was a joy to read. Good luck in the contest

    Becoming a siren
    unto a vernal essence,
    where spring is a love affair
    through new arrays of inner discovery,
    finding that perfect mating orchid of thinking
    who bears offspring
    as the arrangements of awakening

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