Roses have woven
around she who has chosen
to be among the flowers
they meet her and greet her
and hug her and treat her
for hours upon hours
seduced by their love
this swooning dove
doth layeth down to rest
as the night reaches dawn
the vines, they work on
creating a snare across her chest
and when she awakes
she realizes her mistake
and knows she was not clever
for she who takes dozes
in red beds of roses
their's she will be forever
Author notes
I really enjoyed writing this one, the picture that was given for a prompt really inspired me, so props to the artist on that.
A contest entry
- Semi-Quicki- Picture Prompt by Catie Sheeran.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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great take on the prompt! very beautiful write and great imagery.
Good luck
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this is really well done. i haven't seen too many good poems on roses. this is really cool. Great Job!
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you must have a passion for poetr
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This indeed is a nice work of poetry here. Pen down more of such creative- nature related topics. We look forward to read..
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amazing
i loved this poem thought you used great imagery
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