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Lost In Confusion

Troy's voice of reason:

lost in confusion
"where did I go wrong?"
Drugs and alcohol
tore open my soul
..minds left empty

deep within I'm buried
no words of the wise can find
"why do I hurt so?"
pains claiming my world
..hearts left empty

Struggling with self control
longing for that freedom
"why am I here?"
the other side looks better
..eyes left empty

Wise Words:

"lost in confusion
where did I go wrong?"
Seek within and find yourself
then you'll discover where you belong
...your mind becomes fulfilled

"deep within I'm buried
no words of the wise can find"
Open ears and heart, you will see
that advice that's given will shine
..your heart becomes fulfilled

"Struggling with self control
longing for that freedom"
Darkness doesn't release you
just steals the light from someone
...your eyes become fulfilled

Confusion makes us weary and weak
and thoughts unraveling make us think
Release from it all is what we seek
and further in our hell we sink

Yet with the combination of family and friends
we will stand once again
When the battle become harder to withstand
dig deeper to the core of the suffering...
...face it head on, your stronger then you think my friend...

Author notes

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Write me something about the picture. Just one rule Please write about the picture his name is Troy. All i want you to do is describe the picture . Give it all you got.

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Comments


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    WHOA!!

    You took this prompt and ran with it.
    I like that and you totally put some imagery to it.
    And was very descriptive.
    It was an awesome write and it flowed so well it was almost perfect.
    OUTSTANDING!
    I loved it!
    -Mandi


  • The Drifter
    November 26, 2008
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    So well written and flows perfectly.
    Love you


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 25, 2008

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    i think you took that prompt and gave it your own twist and you look at the picture and you expressed what you saw, clear and creative, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest