The surface disappeared,
When I fell into you.
I was ensnared by your
Bottomless trap of emotions.
You teased me when you said,
Those three blasphemous words.
When all along
She was a better toy than me.
I've recoiled from your deceit.
You're not worth the pain.
A contest entry
- Quickie - Word Prompt - Wince by ml12.
500 points, ended November 27, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It was short but I think you said all you needed to say. I liked the implicit emotion and my favourite line was "Those three blasphemous words." Thanks for entering the contest
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this poem was kind of sad but you made the propmt cut for this contest which is good and good luck to you hon
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