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In Soft Slumber

In soft slumber
You moan
Heated air I breathe
Inside your ear
Nibbling
And my kisses
Slowly move down
Your lovely neck
To the subtle depression
Where it ends
Tongue exploring
Soft mounds of flesh
I trace a delicate circle
Around excited nipples
And a trail down
Sensitive valley
Toward your pretty navel
Tongue entwining
With silver ring
So delicately placed
Your belly draws tight
With a sudden “gasp”
From your lovely lips
Rolling you over
I tenderly kiss
Sexy dimples
Flanking the
Luxurious hollow
Of your writhing back
Drawing you up
I lovingly kiss
Taut skin

You awake with passion

I am gone

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Lionheart--4 entries

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  • ennovy silver member
    April 11

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    A sweet dream; while she sleeps in flora passion of tender kisses and sensaul bliss...thank you for entering my contest...novy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 9
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    this is quite descriptive and intensely gripping... x


  • jayyniecakes.
    February 6

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    Tongue exploring
    Soft mounds of flesh
    I trace a delicate circle
    Around excited nipples
    And a trail down
    Sensitive valley
    Toward your pretty navel
    Tongue entwining
    With silver ring

    NO EROTICA!


  • Heroesrox
    January 10

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    Awesome job! I really felt the emotion behind this piece! An A+ job! Keep up the awesome work adn thanks so much for the share! I really am looking forward to reading more of your work....which I probably have already............ I read a lot of stuff on here and try to comment on everyones....Sorry for my mindless ramblings.............HAHA!!!!!

    Again.....Thanks so much for the brilliant write and share! Good luck with future writes....but judging from this, you don't really need much luck!!!!!

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~**~Heroesrox~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~*~*~*


  • KayJay
    December 7, 2008

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    What a tease I'll stay dreaming, thank you... A wonderfully erotic and sensual write... Great job.
    Ken


  • Shannon62875
    December 4, 2008

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    wow

    Inside your ear
    Nibbling
    And my kisses
    Slowly move down
    Your lovely neck

    That part was my all time favorite!!! Thats exactly what i like and it just made me move with this... i mean WOW!!! GREAT JOB!! Good luck in my contest and keep up the great work!!!

    Shannon*Leah!!

    Shannon*Leah


  • suseann
    November 26, 2008

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    "I am gone?" You big tease! Ha! Yet tastefully eros interuptous! For the sake of keeping it a clean poem. Has the longing passion of verse. Nice work.


    • Lionheart
      November 26, 2008
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      OOPS

      I forgot how to give hugs


    • Lionheart
      November 26, 2008
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      Me? A tease? Nahhh!

      I am not very good at erotica but I had to try. I'm too bashful.
      Have a nice Thanksgiving day my friend <


  • Lilredlll
    November 25, 2008

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    Very Sensuous

    This describes what I seem to be going thru to the last line. It sounds like a dream I tend to have nearly every nite. Its scary how you can capture the feelings in poem. Thx for sharing.
    Linda

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