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Her

His tongue massages
She oozes euphoria
He swallows it all

A contest entry

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  • geckogirl silver member
    December 23, 2008
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    very sensual... short yer... this says it all


  • Aimee Hill
    December 12, 2008

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    Who'd have thought that so few words...
    would have such an impact.
    This is one HOT read. Excellent penning!!


  • JinSays gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    my goodness.
    this is smoking hot.
    WOW!
    ahem.
    Congratulations on your trophy sir, this is definitely worthy of one, I'd say. .
    Love,
    jin


  • blueyez
    December 1, 2008
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    ummm... wow...

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    .


  • cre8tiv-writer
    November 26, 2008
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    WOW!!!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    damn!

    booooooooooooooyyyyeee you had to have made jewels happy with this one! good stuff kid!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    He has alot to swallow!!!! I love it hon


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    ih yes babe swallow it and i am sitting here in my sexy stuff now only if you could see me you would swallow me good luck in the contest

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